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   <title>TSA Screenplay Challenge (TSASC)! : Welcome to TSA Screenplay Challenge (TSASC)!</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=3">PeterKremer</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Welcome to TSA Screenplay Challenge (TSASC)!<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 14 May 2012 at 2:29pm<br /><br /><p><b><font color="Green">Introducing--</font></b></p> <p><b>The TSA Screenplay Challenge (TSASC)!  </b>In preparation for our annual screenplay contest that is coming up in the fall, we have come up with a special challenge to help you along the writing process and get a script done in time!  So what's it about?  Let's first look at the TSASC timeline--</p> <p><b>Between now and May 19th: Come up with the following--</b></p><ul><li>Logline (in one or two sentences, describe who the protagonist is and their conflict--should include the following):</li><li>Genre (horror, sci-fi, drama, comedy, etc)</li><li>Protagonist</li><li>Protagonist's Goal</li><li>Conflict</li></ul> <p><b>May 23rd: Develop logline into a one page synopsis: </b>  Based on the above elements you've already established, write down a basic one page story outline for your screenplay.  A good way that this can be done is by writing it in three paragraphs, one for each act, that describes in a general way the main story events for that section of the script.</p> <p><b>May 30th: Develop synopsis a four page step-outline:</b>  This is where writers will begin to flesh out their story in greater detail, constructing their story as much as they can prior to actually writing a script.  A step-outline is scene-by-scene outline of your story where each scene is described by only a single line.  Each line should tell the very basic elements that will be included in the scene, both plot and character depictions, that move the story forward.  A single page should be used for ACT 1, a second page for the first 1/2 of ACT 2, another page for the second 1/2 of ACT 2, and a fourth page for ACT 3, as shown in the diagram below: </p> <p><sub>----(page 1)----|----(pg 2)----|----(pg 3)----|----(pg 4)----|<br>----Act 1--------|-------------Act 2------------|-----Act 3-----|</sub></p><p>This four-page step-outline can be developed into a more detailed outline or treatment.  Remember to include those important emotional decisions that your protagonist will make during the course of the story; those are the things that will grab a reader and make your characters come alive.  Try to put as much as you can into into developing the outline so that the general flow of your story is worked-out.  That way, when you go to the next step (writing the script), you can focus on scene dynamics and dialog.  Also, keep in mind that your script should be only about 100 pages long (shorter if it's a comedy!)  So each page of your step-outline will describe what occurs during 25 actual screenplay pages.</p> <p><b>July 1st: Begin writing script:</b> Start with FADE IN and go from there!  The challenge is designed so that your writing schedule should be as flexible as you want to make it.  As long as you write ONE PAGE A DAY, you should have a completed screenplay by the deadline.  If you'd rather write 7 pages a weekend or 25 pages on the last day of the month, go for it!</p> <p><b>Oct 31st: Finish up:</b>  By this time, writers should have their script done, and a full month before the deadline of---</p> <p><b>Dec 1st: TSA Screenplay Contest Deadline:</b> During this process, writers are encouraged to present material at TSA meetings or post on the forum to see what's working and what's not.  NOTE:  After July 1st, writers can only present one section of their screenplay at a time; ie you can't present the first fifteen pages of your story twice.  Take notes the first time, but DO NOT RE-WRITE until you have completed the script.  Continue forging onward and bring in the next fifteen pages.  Don't get bogged-down in the re-write until your script is completed.  </p><p>Also, writers don't have to start from scratch.  If you already have a work in progress, then feel free to use that.</p><p>The goal of the Challenge is to complete a script.  Will it be ready to send out immediately?  Probably not.  But that shouldn't be the focus at this point.  The first draft is about getting the story set down.  Some parts will be great, and some parts less-so.  Don't fret.  Embrace the joy of creating without worrying whether it is perfect; by writing with a good outline as your guide, you will be on a good path.  You can worry about "perfection" later.  Have fun and be excited that you will have a finished script at the end of this process!</p>]]>
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   <title>Movie Reviews : Bourne Again</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=3">PeterKremer</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Bourne Again<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 30 Mar 2012 at 10:20pm<br /><br />Eh... not&nbsp; being well versed in the Bourne series, my "answer from a dolt" would would be, because it was written in Hollywood?<br><br>Sorry, but I think your Clancy quote is my "taking the fifth" position I'll have to take until I can rewatch the series.<br>]]>
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   <pubDate>Fri, 30 Mar 2012 22:20:30 +0000</pubDate>
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   <title>Movie Reviews : Bourne Again</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=40">bholmes</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Bourne Again<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 30 Mar 2012 at 6:58pm<br /><br /><P>BOURNE SUPREMACY</P><DIV><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>Okay, I know it's been nearly ten years but there’s something about this script that doesn't add up (maybe there's a whole list of things but I'm addressing only one). </P><DIV>&nbsp;</DIV><DIV>First, let me say I'm a huge fan of all the Bourne movies and still really enjoy watching them. That said... <?: prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></DIV><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>IN&nbsp;TONY GILROY'S&nbsp;SCRIPT... the attempted hit on Bourne happens <U>before</U> his fingerprint is planted on the explosive in Berlin. <SPAN style="TEXT-TRANS: uppercase">In the movie version</SPAN> those two events are reversed, which is more logical.<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =MsoBlockText><SPAN lang=EN>ABBOTT (Conklin's boss who headed up TREADSTONE in the first Bourne movie) has concocted the FINGERPRINT plan to make it look like Bourne killed the two agents in Berlin to obtain money and KGB secrets or something like that. Abbott’s plan of killing Bourne and pinning the Berlin killings on him backfired when the assassin botched things up by killing MARIE instead of BOURNE. So, now Bourne is on a new mission of retribution.</SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>My question is why? Why would Abbott want to kick the hornets nest? Abbott obviously knows Bourne is half-way around the world in India and just wants to be left alone. He’s no threat at all.<SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes">&nbsp; </SPAN>He also knows that Bourne is an elite assassin who is extremely good at survival and not easy to kill. Wouldn’t it have been to Abbott’s advantage to choose someone else less lethal to be the fall guy? Also, TREADSTONE is long dead and buried and best forgotten. Why dredge all that up? I just don’t think Abbott’s decisions make sense for someone as diabolical as he’s portrayed. What happens makes for a good story but I have doubts that it makes good logic. <o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><P style="MARGIN: 0.75pt 1.5pt" =Ms&#111;normal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN" lang=EN>&nbsp;<o:p></o:p></SPAN></P><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Verdana; COLOR: black; FONT-SIZE: 9pt; mso-ansi-: EN; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-: EN-US; mso-bidi-: AR-SA" lang=EN>What am I missing here?</SPAN></DIV>]]>
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   <title>So which movies should I watch? : Underdog movies</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=30">JosephNobles</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Underdog movies<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 13 Mar 2012 at 6:52am<br /><br />Yes, John is a ubercop, but he's still one guy out of his element with a single handgun at the beginning of the movie.<div><br></div><div>Yeah, I guess I'm looking for both of those kinds of movies. Not so much the lonesome loser type, &nbsp;like I imagine Ryan and the Real Girl to be. And, yes, I'm waiting for the Hunger Games, too. I wanted to read the books before, but I never got to it. Too many other books to read.</div>]]>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=40">bholmes</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Underdog movies<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 13 Mar 2012 at 6:21am<br /><br />Looks like Katniss Everdeen in Hunger Games is going to be one of those characters. <DIV>&nbsp;</DIV><DIV>Can't wait till the movie opens - 3.23 - I believe.</DIV><span style="font-size:10px"><br /><br />Edited by bholmes - 13 Mar 2012 at 7:04am</span>]]>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=3">PeterKremer</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Underdog movies<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 12 Mar 2012 at 9:04pm<br /><br />David is an underdog to Goliath.<br><br>Mclane is a formidable cop.<br>]]>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=3">PeterKremer</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Underdog movies<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 12 Mar 2012 at 9:01pm<br /><br />Underdog or over whelming odds?<br><br>Kinda different things.<br>]]>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=30">JosephNobles</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Underdog movies<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 09 Mar 2012 at 8:14am<br /><br />Any and all genres. Mainly I'm looking for how the underdog pulls even with the antagonist for the final battle. Second act stuff.<div><br></div><div>Here's my list so far:</div><div><br></div><div>Die Hard - just watched it again last night. McClane is one against 12 men with superior firepower, but as he kills them off, he acquires their weapons. Even so, Hans the antagonist gains more and more information about him, exploiting it to keep knocking him back - finding out he has bare feet, and then shooting out the glass; discovering his wife; etc.&nbsp;</div><div><br></div><div><div>October Sky</div><div>Babe</div><div>Rocky</div><div>Karate Kid</div><div>12 Angry Men</div><div>Mr. Smith Goes To Washington</div><div>Miracle on 34th Street</div><div>One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest</div></div>]]>
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   <title>Movie Reviews : Prelude to a Kiss</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=34">slperks</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> Prelude to a Kiss<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 12 Feb 2012 at 6:34pm<br /><br />I watched part of this film a while back on Netflix instant. &nbsp;I can't remember if I fell asleep or if I got a phone call, but I never saw the second half and oddly, my life has not seemed to suffer for lack of it!! &nbsp;<div><br></div><div>Sharon Perkins&nbsp;</div>]]>
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   <title>Movie Reviews : THE DESCENDANTS</title>
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    <![CDATA[<strong>Author:</strong> <a href="http://tennscreen.com/TSA_forum/member_profile.asp?PF=3">PeterKremer</a><br /><strong>Subject:</strong> THE DESCENDANTS<br /><strong>Posted:</strong> 12 Feb 2012 at 5:40pm<br /><br />Wow! This was tragedy on top of deceit, on top angst, anger wrapped in several&nbsp; dilemmas on top of contentious extended family money issues. <br><br>This was adapted wonderfully. I haven't read the book but by virtue of the subject matter, so much of this story takes place in their heads and hearts of the characters,&nbsp; the writers and actors are WONDERFUL!<br><br>The boyfriend was annoying but, quite real.&nbsp; I've known that guy from several points of perspective along a life time. As one of the gang as an adolescent&nbsp; and again as a father of a daughter. He was weird, annoying and&nbsp; lacking social skills, but absolutely believable.<br><br>I liked it, even though it brought a lump to my throat and tears.<br><br>I'll watch it again but I will not buy it. Not because it's not good. But because I don't regularly feel the need for a good cry.<br><span style="font-size:10px"><br /><br />Edited by PeterKremer - 12 Feb 2012 at 5:43pm</span>]]>
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